June 23, 2010

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With the efflorescence of the Sun,
the soft Sun rays
rush me into a muse,
and ,i experience
soothing my face
my beloved`s fervorous breaths.
Comes to me,memory of the moment
when i first kissed thou.
Amusing to recollect
that--
warmth of my kiss was
ovated by the tender lips,
and,on my shoulders
the touch of your hands
screamed for an encore,
Far seeing the blue waters
catching his reflection
The Sun smiled!!

6 comments:

  1. Wow..its amazing how the feelings have been expressed metaphorically!Applause! :)

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  2. Wow !! You are awesome Uncle..Way to go..Keep them coming..

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  3. wow....
    well expressd...
    thought deeply...

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  4. very appealing..keep up.

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  5. Tender feelings always directly pours in to one's heart. Very expressive indeed!!!!! Sanjaya Srivastava {I don't hope if Vartika remembers me?}

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