With the efflorescence of the Sun,
 the soft Sun rays
 rush me into a muse,
 and ,i experience
 soothing my face
 my beloved`s fervorous breaths.
 Comes to me,memory of the moment
 when i first kissed thou.
 Amusing to recollect
 that--
 warmth of my kiss was 
 ovated by the tender lips,
 and,on my shoulders
 the touch of your hands 
 screamed for an encore,
 Far seeing the blue waters
 catching his reflection 
 The Sun smiled!!
Wow..its amazing how the feelings have been expressed metaphorically!Applause! :)
ReplyDeleteWow !! You are awesome Uncle..Way to go..Keep them coming..
ReplyDelete:) Nice, Nice:)
ReplyDeletewow....
ReplyDeletewell expressd...
thought deeply...
very appealing..keep up.
ReplyDeleteTender feelings always directly pours in to one's heart. Very expressive indeed!!!!! Sanjaya Srivastava {I don't hope if Vartika remembers me?}
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